Nice job creating your bucket list of things you want to do and places to visit before you die. You did an excellent job with your research and writing interesting scripts. Also nice job finding images that go well with topic. Voice recordings had some problems but I'm not sure if it was equipment failure or if you had the microphone volume down low - some of your recordings were perfect volume, speed and clarity. Other recordings the volume was really low. I'm giving you the benefit of the doubt and going to assume it was equipment failure. You sounded confident when recording even on the lower volume recordings. However, in the future . . . this should be checked and re-recorded if it were to happen.
Other than that you did a GREAT job.
Introduction could have been expanded a little bit.
Nichole,
ReplyDeleteNice job creating your bucket list of things you want to do and places to visit before you die. You did an excellent job with your research and writing interesting scripts. Also nice job finding images that go well with topic. Voice recordings had some problems but I'm not sure if it was equipment failure or if you had the microphone volume down low - some of your recordings were perfect volume, speed and clarity. Other recordings the volume was really low. I'm giving you the benefit of the doubt and going to assume it was equipment failure. You sounded confident when recording even on the lower volume recordings. However, in the future . . . this should be checked and re-recorded if it were to happen.
Other than that you did a GREAT job.
Introduction could have been expanded a little bit.
96/100